DISCUSSION NOTES (SUPERVISOR)
MR: BG and MR scrutinised GDH's CR documentation via screenshare of a Google Doc (made available prior to the meeting)
BG and MR made suggestions to GDH:
-to amend the current structure to remove the 'Chapter' descriptor and keep the 'essay' subheadings.
- to move three of the current 'literature review' sections to the 'methodology' section (praxis, artist interviews, analysis of the works/findings).
- to condense some of the appendices into one and place the most apt ones up front in the appendix list i.e. praxis.
- to remove some examples of the creative writing, transart intensive works, and sound works from the methods section if they are not directly linked to the project.
- to place the praxis up front in the methods list and 'shout about it' < tell the assessor that they need to look at the 32 works available online/as an appendix.
Discussion notes (researcher)
GDH: Mark, Borinquen and I met for nearly 90 minutes and discussed my recent draft Confirmation of Registration Reports, and their comments, edits, updates.
I will make recommended edits, including those listed below in the "Agreed (upon) action points (to be completed after the meeting)".
Agreed action points (to be completed after the meeting)
MR: See comments above.
To submit the CoR documents to edoc once ready and await a CoR viva data to be set by the assessor.
GDH:
I will make recommended edits, including:
~ Grammatical corrections
~ Combine Appendices 7, 8 & 9 (all charts/graphs collected into one)
~ Switch order of Appendices 1 & 11 (Praxis work becomes #1)
~ Change name of Appendix 10
~ Create/add Appendix with creative writing pieces that directly influence thesis
~ Eliminate any Appendices or in-text examples that do not directly pertain
~ Add image/link/screen shot of praxis work so that it is more prominently figured into reports
~ After updates are made, upload all documents to eDoc
~ Attend a Doctoral Academy NVivo training session